Come for the politics, stay for the snark.

We’ll be taking my thoughts and prayers to the ballot box.

… riddled with inexplicable and elementary errors of law and fact

Republicans don’t lie to be believed, they lie to be repeated.

“They not like us!” (that’s for sure!)

We cannot abandon the truth and remain a free nation.

They love authoritarianism, but only when they get to be the authoritarians.

If you are still in the gop, you are either an extremist yourself, or in bed with those who are.

Come on, man.

“Jesus paying for the sins of everyone is an insult to those who paid for their own sins.”

The next time the wall street journal editorial board speaks the truth will be the first.

There are more Russians standing up to Putin than Republicans.

They’re not red states to be hated; they are voter suppression states to be fixed.

Chutkan laughs. Lauro sits back down.

I might just take the rest of the day off and do even more nothing than usual.

It’s always darkest before the other shoe drops.

Whatever happens next week, the fight doesn’t end.

We’ve had enough carrots to last a lifetime. break out the sticks.

Every day Vance writes another chapter in the book called “Worst VP Pick Ever”.

It’s not hopeless, and we’re not helpless.

President Biden is doing good where he can, and getting it done.

This fight is for everything.

Fight for a just cause, love your fellow man, live a good life.

No one could have predicted…

The party of Reagan has become the party of Putin.

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Creature NYC – Writing DRAINED!

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A couple of you have asked whether and how authors might fight fit (!) into the Artists in Our Midst series. The answers are sort of, not exactly, and yes.  I hope that clears everything up!

If you’re an author and you want to talk about your writing or your books – or even focus on just one book as we are doing today – by all means please contact me about doing one of these posts.

They will be tagged as Authors in Our Midst, and we will be featuring those posts along with the Artists in Our Midst posts.

Hello, Balloon Juice readers!

My name is Marc (aka Creature_NYC) and, as this is the best community on the internets, it is my absolute honor to be speaking with you all directly. I have been lurking, and very occasionally commenting, here since right after John’s “conversion.” [Hi, John. I love you, man. Your compassion inspires!] For you real old timers, you may remember the name “Creature” from the liberal blog State of the Day.

Well, Creature wrote a book and I wanted to share it with you all.

Creature NYC – Writing DRAINED!

The book is called DRAINED and it’s a young adult, dystopian thriller set in a near-future New York City. DRAINED follows the path of high school senior Casey Parker and her best friend, Jennifer, as they investigate why Jennifer’s boyfriend has gone missing. It’s got an oppressive political party in charge, it’s got brainwashing, some spy craft, a whole lot of thrills, and a great female friendship at its core. As a warning, there is some strong language (used more quippy than offensive) and a very tame sex scene. Thankfully, it’s gotten some good reviews.

As some background, I’ve been working on the book for many years and, without saying how long (for some reason it’s embarrassing), I’ll say the very first kernel of the idea that would become DRAINED came soon after the birth of the Tea Party as I tried to imagine them taking over NYC. But it wasn’t until after Hurricane Sandy hit that my setting and theme came into focus. Let’s just say that by 2048 climate change and the greedy politicians in charge have made a mess of my beloved downtown Manhattan.

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I hope you all will give it a look and spread the word if you like it! My website is acrichewrites.com (with an Indie bookstore buy option there) and if you want to read a Q&A with yours truly, I just got written up by another old-school blog, EV Grieve.

Thanks, everyone, and special thanks to WaterGirl and John for making this possible.

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    WaterGirl

    This is the first of our Authors in Our Midst featured as part of the Artists/Authors series.  In case you have missed any of the others, there is a link for them under Featuring in the sidebar. (That shows up after the comments on mobile.)

    If you are an author, you can write about just one book, as Marc has done here, or write about all your books, or a set of characters that show up in a number of books, etc.  The content of the post is up to you – within reason, of course!

    Please send me an email message if you are in interested in either the Authors or Artists series.

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    creature_NYC

    Hello, WaterGirl and Ballon Juicers! I want to thank WaterGirl and John again for allowing me to post about DRAINED. I’ll be around in the comments, if anyone has any questions. Happy Sunday and I hope you all are safe and well.

    -Marc

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    jeffreyw

    A couple of you have asked whether and how authors might fight into the Artists in Our Midst series.

    I have no opinion on what the rules should be but I will volunteer to hold their coats.

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    SiubhanDuinne

    Purchased and downloaded! I look forward to reading Drained.

    Now … how about that dinosaur story from first grade, eh?

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    Major Major Major Major

    Congrats! And you shouldn’t be embarrassed no matter how many years it took you to finish a book and successfully publish it. You wrote a book and people are reading it! Most people don’t even finish the first part.

    WG, I have a short story that’s important to me coming out in October but I’ll do my own post.

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    sab

    I am intrigued. Would your book make sense to anyone who is not very familiar with NYC? Everything I know about NYC I learned on Law and Order.

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    creature_NYC

    @Major Major Major Major: Many drafts. If pushed, I’d say three major drafts. At point there was a prologue that I cut and incorporated into the main story, and two different middles and endings. The major turning point came after a developmental edit. The notes were so spot on that they elevated the book from okay to great (I think ?) and it all just clicked.

    Overall, it was a long, slow slog, but worth it.

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    HinTN

    @creature_NYC:

    A tension-filled dystopian crusade for freedom, no matter the personal cost.

    Alrighty, then. Plus, I’m a sucker for a “tame sex scene” anytime!

    Congrats

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    creature_NYC

    @Dorothy A. Winsor: Hi, Dorothy! Thank you. The reviews have been a fun part of this. While there have been some so-so ones, the good’s are so good that it floors me. Realizing the story and the characters were connecting with people was/is very satisfying.

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    Dorothy A. Winsor

    DRAINED is now on my kindle.

    And, Fellow Jackals, if you enjoy this book and have time, a review is always a good thing. For one thing, Amazon uses the sheer number of reviews as a basis for inclusion in their promotion–all that “if you liked this, you may like this” stuff.

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    Evap

    Congratulations , the book sounds great.

    I wrote a math book during the pandemic, publication date is late October.  It’s a research monograph, so not of interest to anyone here.  I must say, I still can’t quite believe I wrote a book! The cover is already on the Springer (publisher) website and on the Barnes and Noble website.  What a feeling!

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    TaMara (HFG)

    @NotMax: Only because the Writers’ posts were all-encompassing – writing group, new authors, Q&A about writing…

    Thanks WaterGirl! for taking over while I continue my extended break (where I really am focusing on my third book and also personal blogging).

    Congrats to creature NYC!

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    PaulWartenberg

    Short story writer here, currently working on another submission to the Strangely Funny anthology series. I got a 2020 story “War of the Murder Hornets” in their latest edition (volume 8) available in print and ebook on Amazon.

    I’m also a member of the Florida Writers Association, which does an annual Royal Palm Literary awards, and for 2021 I submitted that murder hornets story for short fiction as well as four of my blog articles for short non-fiction… and I heard back from the judges last week that I didn’t get a single one past Semifinalist stage. /cries

    How goes your work, y’all.

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    Debbie(Aussie)

    Very late to the thread.but want to let you know the book sounds great and is on my iPad for future reading. Congrats on the reviews?

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