In a post this morning, I challenged BJ peeps to write an ode to Biden, an ode to Kamala, an ode to Walz. Or a poem, a rhyme, a limerick, a story.
We got some good ones!
Here’s something thoughtful from Damien that I wanted to share tonight.
Changing of the Stars
Folding quietly, unable to sustain but afraid to fall
A colossal success, the faded sun reviewed its work
Warmth, light, energy, its burn had fueled lives it would never know
Unwilling to abandon the lives its work had nurtured
The sun would not, could not, see its fading
It would not, could not, see the footman with its coat
Arrived and patient, the fearful rush of time implacable
Fear. Fear imperceptible in the lives it saved
Fear of what might come once the sun took on the coat of eternity
Fear readied the sun for darkest collapse
Its love would kill the very lives it wished to save
A maw of malevolent nothing on prowling periphery
Accepting of its own time passing, the sun, the star, fought back
In the only way it could anymore
It gave up its dream of a few more years
To sacrifice for new energy
A bigger star
A stronger light to fight the bitter blackness
The sun gave up its place
For a super nova
Open thread.
Sister Machine Gun of Quiet Harmony
That is beautiful.
🐾BillinGlendaleCA
When I refreshed the page and this post came up, I thought what a nice Milky Way shot… Wait it looks familiar… Hey that’s my shot!
WaterGirl
@🐾BillinGlendaleCA: That’s why it says “Photo by BillinGlendaleCA” :-)
I hope you don’t mind. I wanted a photo related to stars and the sky – who else would I have thought of but you?
WaterGirl
I am heading for bed, but I want to remind everyone that this is an open thread, so talk about whatever you want. :-) Even if that is totally unrelated to the beautiful poem up top.
🐾BillinGlendaleCA
@WaterGirl: Don’t mind at all.
WaterGirl
@🐾BillinGlendaleCA: Tell them to give you more time off (with pay!) so you have more time for photography.
Goodnight, all.
mrmoshpotato
@🐾BillinGlendaleCA: It’s a very nice photo.
Bupalos
I appreciate the work, Repect that.
To me, Democrats are the ones that don’t write poems about leaders. And Our leaders are the ones that don’t want poems written about them.
the rock star rallies we’re creating right now are about US. They’re awesome because WE are awesome. And the people up in front are a kind of amalgamation. Entities that bow to humanity and derive their dignity from that act, rather than asking humanity to bow to them.
featheredsprite
Wow. Quite a poem.
Dangerman
Bill, I’m calling that Rincon Beach; how close am I? Driven it a thousand times.
The Golux
I’ve been thinking over the past several days that someone (Subaru Diane?) needs to come up with alternate lyrics for Summertime, Summertime by the Jamies. Here’s my attempt:
It’s Kamela, Kamela, Kam Kam Kamela
Kamela, Kamela, Kam Kam Kamela
Kamela, Kamela, Kam Kam Kamela
Kamela, Kamela, Kam Kam Kamela
Ka-a-amela time!
Well no more right-wing bigotry
And no phony religiosity
And no more damn misogyny
Because it’s Ka-amela time!
Suggestions welcome.
JCNZ
Mar-A-Lardo, first Tuesday in November, 2024
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fall_of_Saigon#/media/File:Saigon-hubert-van-es.jpg
🐾BillinGlendaleCA
@WaterGirl: Yeah, that would be nice…
Actually, today is my last day of 5 days of vacation(tomorrow and Friday are my weekend. I did get in one good MW shoot up at Little Lakes Valley, it was awesome.
🐾BillinGlendaleCA
@Dangerman: Malibu, near Pt. Mugu State Park.
@mrmoshpotato: Thanks, it was the first MW shot with my A7iv, though now I pretty much use my astromod A7r for Milky Way shots.
SiubhanDuinne
@The Golux:
Ooh, I like that a lot! I’m in bed for the night, but might play with putting in a verse or two tomorrow. Though I don’t know why I should — you’re on a roll!
ETA: I’ve probably mentioned this before, but I do love your nym. The 13 Clocks is one of my all-time favorite books.
Mr. Bemused Senior
@The Golux: good to see you!
Mr. Bemused Senior
My daughter’s family live with me and our bedtime ritual is me reading to the twins [boy and girl, IVF]. We happen to be on a Wrinkle in Time.
Damien’s poem calls to mind Mrs. Whatsit and her fight against the Black Thing. An apt coincidence.
The Dark Avenger
No One of Consequence
See Dems in Array
Check next morn for Sun in East
See Baud Ascendant
-NOoC
PsiFighter37
90 days to go. I hope the Dem speechwriters are cooking up new stuff, because the DNC speeches are being done now (and hopefully different from current stump speeches), and they should be more reactive in real time to Vance’s latest stupidity or Trump’s odd absence (along with everything else).
SiubhanDuinne
Damien’s poem is magnificent. Tears. Just gorgeous.
rikyrah
Everything beautiful.. The picture and the poem
rikyrah
@PsiFighter37:
ICAM
BR
Make your own Walz poem using the Walz generator:
https://timwalzfixedyourbicycle.com/
KatKapCC
@No One of Consequence: Ooh I like haikus.
Joyful warriors
Against a tide of hatred
Onward, Kam and Tim!
Lyrebird
Thank you Damien, a beautiful poem.
I saw that this morning and didn’t have time – was hoping WaterGirl might do this very thing!
Didn’t predict the great Bill in Glendale illustration to go with.
@No One of Consequence: hee hee hee.
@KatKapCC:
Oh, I like that too!
4D*hiker
This is a wonderful poem capturing the emotions and dynamics of those dark three weeks in July—-grief, anger, fear, betrayal, humiliation, humility, resignation, acceptance, courage, and, ultimately, sacrificial love, pride, and hope.
Love the complementary photo, too. Another artist at work.
BR
Bupalos suggested the Walz interview with Ezra Klein. I can’t stand the NYT, but Walz is amazing in this interview:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3fuS9PmV9hg
Ishiyama
Higgledy Piggledy
Biden our President
didn’t have energy
to keep fighting Trump
Calling on Kamala,
Coincidentally
Tossing the Trump campaign
into the dump.
JCNZ
@VeniceRiley‘s comment on August 6: “Walz is the guy that would have been our father and grandfather had they not been captured by the full on right wing media onslaught psychological warfare. He’s the man we all lost to them. He will draw a lot more than anyone thinks. I about sobbed watching him.”
Heather Cox Richardson in her column today: “A number of observers are saying that part of the genius of the Walz pick is that he seems to many people to be the dad and grandfather stolen away by the right-wing rage machine…” [email protected]
What a time to be alive! 😂
karen marie
I am not a poet, and I know it. I think Jim Walz Fixed Your Bicycle says it best.
JCNZ
I should have added – “DougJBalloon – meet VeniceRiley!”
Kelly
Tim Walz Says feed on Bluesky. Stuff people feel America’s best neighbor Tim Walz would say.
https://bsky.app/profile/did:plc:qrllvid7s54k4hnwtqxwetrf/feed/aaacudns2pzfa
karen marie
@Mr. Bemused Senior: I loved A Wrinkle In Time when I was a kid. Thank you for reading it with your grandkids.
karen marie
@BR: You beat me to my repost of it from an earlier thread!
The Golux
@Mr. Bemused Senior: I’ve been lurking all along, I just have a tendency to be too late to contribute to the comments. For once I was able to respond early!
The Golux
@SiubhanDuinne:
Alas, I have neither an indescribable hat, nor a describable beard.
I think Thurber used those words as a tweak to Harold Ross, the New Yorker founder and editor-in-chief, who hated writers using the word “indescribable”.
BethanyAnne
The poem and the photo are both beautiful.
NotMax
Urgh. 3½ hour power outage this afternoon.
Geoduck
@The Dark Avenger: Typical Nyarlathotep lies. Azathoth doesn’t give a damn whether we live or die.
Yutsano
The Swifties have been called.
Ishiyama
I have a treasured first edition of The White Deer.
danielx
Nice photo, nice poem.
Eta: okay, very nice.
danielx
@No One of Consequence:
For chrissakes don’t encourage his plan for world domination.
Chet Murthy
@danielx: “I for one welcome our new Baud Overlord”
karen marie
@Yutsano: I do not understand Swift’s concert outfits. Why does she always wear a one-piece bathing suit?
KatKapCC
@karen marie: She spends most of the time doing choreographed dance routines that involve a lot of leg movement. She can’t do that stuff wearing jeans. Beyoncé often wears similar garments. They need maximum ease of movement.
Damien
Oh my gosh, I just came back to BJ from dinner to see my poem on the front page! Thank you so very much for the kind words everyone, and I’m honored to be highlighted by WaterGirl alongside the incredible BillinGlendale’s photo. Truly not something I ever expected, and it made my whole day.
I felt today the reality that all the things that seem to us eternal eventually fade, becoming new fixtures for someone else to call immortal; Joe Biden is the last of the Boomer presidents, and it’s hard to believe that’s possible.
SFAW
@The Dark Avenger:
Speaking of JV Pance’s incompetence:
“JD Vance’s Michigan rally could’ve been an email.”
Citizen Alan
I swear to God. There is not enough Wellbutrin and Clonazapane to get me through this election season if they start Swift-Boating Tim Walz.
Chet Murthy
@SFAW: Omigod. He’s drawing dead. He can’t survive as the VP nominee, he just *can’t* …. can he?
frosty
@Ishiyama:
I’d forgotten about Higgledy-Piggledys. This was great.
NotMax
The little ones should all be abed by now, so here goes. Very quickly dashed off.
A fellow who now goes by Vance
Gave furniture more than a glance
“That couch is so svelte”
He thought to himself
While stirrings occurred in his pants
.
SFAW
@Citizen Alan:
Better stock up, since they’ve already started (as I expect you know).
One of Karl Rove’s go-to moves was attacking/ratfucking an opponent’s strengths. Let’s hope the Dems have figured out how to do a scorched-earth response, since they’ve had 20 years since the original Swift Boating.
ETA: What name was Vance using when he was in Iraq? [ETA2: Hamel, apparently. He seems to have changed his last name around the time he was writing “Cletus Elegy.”]
wjca
@SFAW: Well, Trump will be happy to see that his VP selection isn’t getting bigger crowds than he does.
knally
In other good news, the far right seems to have been thwarted in the UK.
NotMax
@SFAW
And on the steps of a -police station.
Which public servant signed off on closing down access within and making that a political platform?
SFAW
@NotMax:
Well, given the size of the “rally,” it’s not clear there were enough people to block the doors. “Hey, buddy, can you get out of the way? I need to go file a theft report.” Probably more of the MSM than actual supporters there.
ETA: Distinguishing between professed supporters, and stealth supporters (i.e., MSM), of course.
NotMax
@SFAW
From what I’ve seen the gaggle of flags and phalanx of uniformed officers effectively blocked ingress.
SFAW
@NotMax:
I think the bigger deterrent would have been citizens saying “Eww, I have to walk near that couchfucker? Ewwww!”
Jay
@knally:
Funny how a quick application of law and order, coupled with Antifa showing up, and swift justice*, has an quelling effect on Nazi’s.
*the first guy charged, less than 3 days after his riot participation, was arraigned, tried in front of a jury, convicted and sentenced to 3 years in jail. no parole.
SFAW
@SFAW:
Relative to Swift Boating:
“JV Pance thinks he can trash-talk someone who was in the service for 24 years, when Pance’s only claim to fame (re: military) was doing some shitty PR work in the Public Affairs unit in Iraq after Desert Storm? The unit which made the Iraqis hate us more at the end than they did when Desert Storm started? Well OK then.”
Yutsano
I had typed this earlier but stupid touchpad erased it before I could send it.
I made some bomb ass spaghetti con aglio e olio tonight. I got to see two beautiful works of art. I’m going from cautiously optimistic to just plain optimistic. Not there yet but getting there. I think we might even hit the trifecta.
Ishiyama
@frosty: Thank you. They are known as double dactyls, a very stylized form.
Fair Economist
@NotMax: Hah! Fun.
frosty
@Ishiyama: The hardest part is the single six syllable word in the second verse. Nicely done!
Ishiyama
@frosty: And it has to be biographical (biographically works in line six, too.)
Baud
@🐾BillinGlendaleCA:
Fool. You had a winning copyright suit. You could have owned BJ!
It is a lovely photo. Perfect for this topic.
JerseyBeard
That is really, really, good.
Thank you for sharing it. Made my day.
WereBear
Damien, that was gorgeous.
MomSense
@JCNZ:
I saw that!!! I know this was a tough process for most here, but we really needed to make a change. Now we can feel what it’s like when we have enthusiasm on our side and we can see the results of voter engagement. The conversation has completely shifted to optimism and what is possible.
Liminal Owl
Wow.
@🐾BillinGlendaleCA: Stunningly beautiful picture.
@WaterGirl: Thank you for the photo, and for Damian’s lovely poem. Just wow.
Liminal Owl
@Ishiyama: ooh, that’s excellent too. (And I’m always a sucker for double dactyls. I blame early exposure to NY Magazine competitions. ) (Outdated now, but last year I was trying to write one for Cassidy Hutchinson.)
K-Mo
A-plus for Damien!
No One of Consequence
@JCNZ:
Just read this, and the truth of it washed over me. Damn. Brilliant.
-NOoC
No One of Consequence
@NotMax:
Bravo. The Man from Nantucket is envious.
-NOoC
Ramalama
I read the poem and am a better person for having done so.
Anyway
Bravo Damien! it’s lovely – I missed it when it was first posted – thanks WG for highlighting